Editing Services.
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Developmental Editing
A developmental edit focuses on the big-picture elements of your novel. I evaluate core aspects such as character arc, setting, narrative structure, pacing, and language to identify what’s working and what can be strengthened.
You will receive a detailed editorial letter (5–10 pages) outlining key insights and actionable suggestions. I also provide in-line comments throughout your manuscript using Microsoft Word, offering specific, contextual feedback throughout your novel.
To support your revision process, this edit includes a one-hour phone consultation where we can discuss the feedback in depth and address any questions you may have.
Rate: $0.015 per word
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Line Editing
A line edit focuses on the craft of your prose at the sentence level, enhancing flow, clarity, tone, and overall readability while preserving your author voice. I refine language and ensure your writing is smooth, engaging, and cohesive throughout the manuscript.
You will receive edits using Track Changes and in-line comments in Microsoft Word, allowing you to review every suggestion in context.
To support your revision process, this service includes a one-hour phone consultation to discuss the feedback and address any questions you may have.
Rate: $0.015 per word
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Manuscript Assessment
A manuscript assessment provides focused feedback on your work, guided by the specific questions and concerns you have about your manuscript. I complete a full read-through and deliver a concise editorial letter (2–4 pages) addressing the areas you’d like evaluated.
Whether you have questions about character arcs, structure, pacing, or resolution, you’ll receive clear, actionable insights to help you move forward with confidence.
To support your revision process, this service includes a one-hour phone consultation to discuss the feedback and address any additional questions.
Flat Rate: $150
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Manuscript Assessment with Comments
A manuscript assessment with comments provides focused feedback on your work, guided by the specific questions and concerns you have about your manuscript. I complete a full read-through and deliver a concise editorial letter (2–4 pages) addressing the areas you’d like evaluated.
In addition, I include in-line comments throughout your manuscript in Microsoft Word, offering targeted, contextual feedback throughout your novel.
Whether you have questions about character arcs, structure, pacing, resolution, or other elements, you’ll receive clear, actionable insights to help you move forward with confidence.
To support your revision process, this service includes a one-hour phone consultation to discuss the feedback and address any additional questions.
Flat Rate: $300
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Chapter Critique
A chapter critique offers focused feedback on a single chapter, evaluating elements such as the hook, readability, voice, dialogue, and overall style. This service is ideal for writers looking to strengthen a specific section or gauge how their work is landing.
You will receive a concise one-page editorial letter with clear, actionable insights to guide your revision.
To support your next steps, this critique includes a 15-minute phone consultation to discuss the feedback and address any questions you may have.
Flat Rate: $25 per chapter
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Key
Developmental Edit — Ideal for writers who have completed a first or second draft and need big-picture feedback on structure, character development, and overall storytelling.
Line Edit — Best suited for writers who have already undergone a developmental edit and are ready to refine their prose at the sentence level.
Manuscript Assessment — A great option if you have specific questions about your manuscript and want targeted, high-level feedback.
Manuscript Assessment with Comments — Perfect for writers who want both focused answers to their questions and in-line feedback throughout the manuscript.
Chapter Critique — Ideal for writers who want to ensure their opening chapter is engaging, effective, and hooks the reader from the very first page.
Don’t take my word for it…
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"I came to Sydney with very specific structural questions about my novel Foam, and she not only delivered the answers I needed, she exceeded all expectations. Her editorial letter offered fresh, invaluable insights that a previous editor had overlooked. What impressed me even more was how she took the time to review her comments with me so I could ask questions and fully understand her suggestions. I’m thrilled with her work and will definitely be returning to her for future projects!"
—Laurel Senick
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FAQs
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I specialize in fiction, including short stories and novels. My experience covers a range of genres and styles, helping writers strengthen story, character, and voice.
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Yes! I offer a sample edit of the first three chapters or the first 30 pages (whichever comes first). Please note your request for a sample edit in the inquiry form.
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My rates are listed under each editorial service. If you’re interested in a custom package or have specific needs, please don’t hesitate to reach out! I’m happy to work with you to create a plan that fits your project.
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Turnaround times vary depending on the type of edit, the length of your manuscript, and my current schedule. Typically:
Chapter Critique: 1–2 weeks
Manuscript Assessment / Assessment with Comments: 2–3 weeks
Line Edit: 4–6 weeks
Developmental Edit: 4–8 weeks
If you have a specific deadline, I’m happy to discuss a timeline that works for your project when you submit your inquiry.
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I am an experienced editor with both academic training and hands-on publishing experience. I earned a degree in English and Business Administration from Gonzaga University and hold a Copyediting Certificate from UC San Diego.
Professionally, I worked as a Publishing Assistant for a small press and as the sole book editor for Active Relationships Center, copyediting books ranging from 50–300 pages. I have also developmentally edited over 50 fiction and nonfiction stories, providing detailed editorial letters with actionable feedback.
In addition to editing for others, I am currently working on my debut 85,000-word fiction thriller, giving me firsthand insight into the writing and revision process from an author’s perspective.
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Absolutely. I treat every manuscript with the utmost confidentiality. For added peace of mind, I preemptively provide an NDA (Non-Disclosure Agreement) for all clients I work with. Your work will never be shared, distributed, or used outside of the editing process without your explicit permission.
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I provide developmental editing, line editing, manuscript assessments, chapter critiques, and formatting services to a wide range of clients, including independent authors, small businesses, academic professionals, and creative teams. I bring a sharp eye and collaborative approach to every project, helping clients refine structure, clarify their message, and elevate their work for publication!
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Yes! You can view examples of my deliverables in the section below.
Try Before You Buy.
Try Before You Buy.
Try Before You Buy. Try Before You Buy.
Foam
Manuscript Assessment
This is an example of an editorial letter focused on questions the author had on story structure.
“Atsikana! Girls!”
Developmental Editing
This is an example of an editorial letter for a short story the author entered into a writing competition.
“Hangman’s Fracture”
Developmental Editing
This is an example of an editorial letter for a nonfiction short story.
“Model of Leader Traits and Leadership”
Line Editing
The following edits were completed under the guide of The Chicago Manual of Style for an academic paper on leadership.